Phee's terrible gothic poetry thread

[torn asunder]

sick and twisted murderous thoughts

through my brain they creep about

flashing steel till the blood won't stop

I cannot let these voices out

bring back stoning and lepers and slaves

and for all the sinners who will not be saved

bring back the CHRIST child.....

so i can finally stand

next to someone nice

(This is about society and how much angst and grief it gives me)

no, see - you got this thread wrong... it's for "terrible" gothic poetry, not good stuff!!!

[Msterbeau]

I died a thousand deaths.

I was then dead.

So in this death

Could I be more dead?

[Oh_My_Goth]

Cold,

Dark,

Death.....

Woe is Me in this terrible state of so called.....life.

Black.....all I have known since before time.....

Abandoned by the angle of death, forced to exist.....unseen by all that is beautiful.

[phee]

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[Msterbeau]

death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death bats death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death satan death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death gloom death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death die death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death sex death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death death...

That's my favorite one EVAR!!

[Rev.Reverence]

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This IS astounding and original, seriously('nother thread).

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Here, THIS is GOTH...

'I see, these visions, sometimes,

projected upon the lids of my eyes,

Woah-oh th' sorrow 'tis overwhelming,

it delves deep into my heart and then I think I'm drowning.

My lungs, they twitch, as I am gasping for air,

I call out for assistance, and no one is there.....'

[Rev.Reverence]

ANANGRYGLAREISTAREACROSSTHEROOMINTODARKNESSITRYTOSHAKETHISFEELINGOFRAGE

THEREISNOWAYTOFINDAWAYOUTAWAYOUTTOFINDAWAYOUTAWAYOUTAWAYOUTITISIMP

OSSIBLETOSEEANYTHINGHEREINTHEPLACEMYBRAINTAKESMEWHENWEGOTHISFARANDTHEY

KEEPPUSHINGTRYINGTOCRUSHTHISSPEEKERWHOISSTILLASEEKERLOOKINGFORTHEWAYOUT

ANDITDOESNOTLOOKGOODFORTHEGOODGUYSRIGHTNOWANDTHEONLYWAYOUTSEEMSTOBE

DEATHBUTITISSOFAROFFWHYARETHOSEAILIENSNOTHEREYETTOSAVEUSFROMUSITISSOBAD

HEREANDITDOESNOTLOOKLIKEITISEVERGOINGTOGETANYBETTERANYTIMEANDISTILLCANNOT

FINDTHEDOORBUTIAMGOINGTOKEEPLOOKINGUNTILIFINDITORTHEYCRUSHMEFORGOODANDIDO

GRINBLAZESATOPMYCHINANDYOUSEETHESTRIPEOFCYNICYSMANDGIGGLEUNCOMFTORABLYI

STILLSITSTILLANDWAITFORYOUANDIWILLUNTILLTHEJUDGEMENTDAYCOMEANDTHENIHAVETO

GOTOWORKANDIDONOTRELISHTHETHINGSIMUSTDOONTHATDAYBUTALLFORTHEBESTTHEYSAY

BUTNONECANTELLMEWHYORWHOHIDTHEDOORBUTIWILLLETYOUINONASECRETTOMOROWOKAY

(edited for spelling but not grammar)

Edited July 18, 2008 by Rev.Reverence

[Oh_My_Goth]

ANANGRYGLAREISTAREACROSSTHEROOMINTODARKNESSITRYTOSHKETHISFEELINGOFRAGE

THEREISNOWAYTOFINDAWAYOUTAWAYOUTTOFINDAWAYOUTAWAYOUTAWAYOUTITISIMP

OSSIBLETOSEEANYTHINGHEREINTHEPLACEMYBRAINTAKESMEWHENWEGOTHISFARANDTHEY

KEEPPUSHINGTRYINGTOCRUSHTHISSPEEKERWHOISSTILLASEEKERLOOKINGFORTHEWAYOUT

ANDITDOESNOTLOOKGOODFORTHEGOODGUYSRIGHTNOWANDTHEONLYWAYOUTSEEMSTOBE

DEATHBUTITISSOFAROFFWHYARETHOSEAILIENSNOTHEREYETTOSAVEUSFROMUSITISSOBAD

HEREANDITDOESNOTLOOKLIKEITISEVERGOINGTOGETANYBETTERANYTIMEANDISTILLCANNOT

FINDTHEDOORBUTIAMGOINGTOKEEPLOOKINGUNTILIFINDITORTHEYCRUSHMEFORGOODANDIDO

GRINBLAZESATOPMYCHINANDYOUSEETHESTRIPEOFCYNICYSMANDGIGGLEUNCOMFTORABLYI

STILLSITSTILLANDWAITFORYOUANDIWILLUNTILLTHEJUDGEMENTDAYCOMEANDTHENIHAVETO

GOTOWORKANDIDONOTRELISHTHETHINGSIMUSTDOONTHATDAYBUTALLFORTHEBESTTHEYSAY

BUTNONECANTELLMEWHYORWHOHITTHEDOORBUTIWILLLETYOUINONASECRETTOMOROWOKAY

Me so dizzy now!!!!!

[phee]

Me so dizzy now!!!!!

Brilliant!... only one line... but so gothic....

[JaneDead]

i love you

you love me

homosexuality

people think

we're just friends

but we're really

lesbians.

oh wait that is not very gothic is it?

how about

i hate you

you hate me

misanthropy

people think

we are freaks

fuck them.

[Rev.Reverence]

i love you

you love me

homosexuality

people think

we're just friends

but we're really

lesbians.

oh wait that is not very gothic is it?

how about

i hate you

you hate me

misanthropy

people think

we are freaks

fuck them.

I honestly think yous could put another totally disconnected stanza in there to connect them...

[JaneDead]

I honestly think yous could put another totally disconnected stanza in there to connect them...

of course but ... i'm lazy

[Rev.Reverence]

blagh

these words are unworthy of paper

i am unworthy of me

i being a mere fraction as cool as i am

i think i am a joke

stabbing myself

and relishing the feeling

of the exorbitant euphoria

lost in repetitive redundancy

mmmmm white castle

[phee]

Blood red

so dead

my heart

torn apart

It's like

a big 'ol spike

Full of stuff

Never enough

worship satan.

[Rev.Reverence]

darkness

Darkness

darkness

Darkness

darkness

Darkness

darkness

Darkness

darkness

Darkness

[phee]

darkness

Darkness

darkness

Darkness

darkness

Darkness

darkness

Darkness

darkness

Darkness

What an interesting comparison in the verse between modern socialism with the current democratic state in Turkey...

[Rev.Reverence]

What an interesting comparison in the verse between modern socialism with the current democratic state in Turkey...

Yeah... you've really scratched the surface on that one...

[odims_sphere]

Rotting from the inside,

Your choice to ignore,

The ebb and flow if this terrible ride,

On time,

This time,

The tide of despair,

Knocks you to the floor.

[GothicRavenGoddess (3)]

im dead,

your dead

lets have zombie sex

no heart

no love

just zombie sex

dead sex....

[phee]

To be alive in the death of the dead live dead

The dark blackness of the darkness blackens us in the dark

LOVE

The beast from inside the middle within the inside growls

The moon above in the sky of the night of the sky is the moon.

BLOOD

The red flows from the redness of her lips that are red

lightning strikes the thunder as it rolls into the lightning.

FIRE

The questions that query the answers of forgotten questioning

Pain that hurts and causes my pain to hurt in the pain.

SEX

Time fades into the past as the future embraces the nowness

Kisses in the lips of the mouth of the tounge the kiss

ALONE

ALONE

ALONE

*fin*

[Rev.Reverence]

TAKE 6

fucked up

sucked

*ANGER*

grrr

[torn asunder]

oh, death, why hast thou forsaken me?

my soul doth lie in thy murky gloom;

come hither and grant me thine unknowing peace

for without release, i abide in thy doom...

[Rev.Reverence]

I suck

I hate me

don't laugh

your just as bad

[bean]

wine

whine

death drops

in

pill form

swallow me

death

[Rev.Reverence]

death left

me behind