The Only Poem I Ever Wrote

[kellygrrrrrl]

Everyone else posts them!

This is a poem I wrote for my cousin.

She wanted me to write a poem and read it her ceremony.

This is it:

Two people on their own

Two people finding their way

Two people searching life for love

Until they met one day

They used to be just acquainted

They used to be just friends

They didn’t know what could be

Of this love they now have

They saw that they should be together

They saw that it could be true

They became each other’s soul mates

They helped each other get through

They wandered through life together

They had found each other at last

They wander alone no more

No looking to the past

They start here with a new beginning

They start here with a promise of love

Together hand in hand

Today they will rise above

Now here they are together at last

Together as husband and wife

Together forever in love

Together forever for life

The one thing I don't like about it is that it all starts with T's....

but, she likes it, and doesn't want me to change it??

[jadnifer]

Kelly, thats a great poem. Keep up the good work. It doesnt matter that every line starts with a "T". It was your creation and if the person that you created it for likes it, keep it that way. If you choose to improve upon it in the future, then do so. Its good its original form however.

In my opinion, you should write more.

[kellygrrrrrl]

shucks! :blushing

Thanks!

[jadnifer]

No problem. Like to tell people when they do a good job. You did a good job.

[Troy Spiral (13)]

Very nice. Has a great series of rhymes to it. The final stanza is very memorable. I probably wont forget it anytime soon.