dig me a shallow grave

[ValleyOfMisery]

cuts out my eyes

see no more

stands blind

body naked and cold

lover once loved

now gone

will not say i m sorry

sins not forgiven

stays siner

glitter is not gold

lover once loved

now gone

lays on the ground

ease the pain

no words

story not been told

lover once loved

now gone

dig me a shallow grave

[Onyx]

wow. I like the rhythm and imagery.

With the right music this piece would make great lyrics.

[torn asunder]

agreed - very lyrical...

[fallennon]

Not to copy but yes, very lyrical...gave me the chills...

[Brenda Starrr]

Very sad and anguished. I liked it.

[ValleyOfMisery]

last night when i put this on the boards it didnt sound that good

but i was thinking about it all night and day and now i think that s one of my best songs

i have more but not on english and my engl is little bit limited to translate em nicely but i ll try

i never writte lyrics just poems but this one has a ring to it

mybe one day ill let someone make the music for it

im glad you like it

(no one on the VF said anything and that made me a little sad)