Nerdcore Posted February 28, 2005 Posted February 28, 2005 Home is where the madness is . Its hard to breath. kinda blurry. (Here in my home.) Its lifeless ( here in my home) I can see clearly my past ( here in my home) I go! I run far, far away. ( from my home) Never look back at it. The Pain. The suffering. The smoke. It burned hard, and fast. ( here in my home) In the distance I saw the flame rise and dance with different colors ( In the house)
FarrIL Posted March 9, 2005 Posted March 9, 2005 I like this poem. It sounds very fitting to that of a broken home. Me likey!!
Nerdcore Posted March 30, 2005 Author Posted March 30, 2005 yea basicly thats where I came from and survived. alot of my writings are from past experence..
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