Wrote This Last Night

[The Kanuck]

Last night, when I was like half asleep this popped into my head so I wrote it down. Just thought I put it up, nothing too big.

I live my life,

like I rest my head at night,

On edge, waiting to fall.

My backed turned on the only people

I could ever turn to.

Naked, exposed. Hiding nothing from:

The world,

Everyone,

You.

[maeve]

I think this is very good. I like the way that you have broken the stanzas, very effective. Nice job!

[Homicidalheathen]

O0ohhh....