who knows

[strawberryshortcake]

i dont know about this one or anything

Sometimes things are so clear to me

I have them figured to the T.

I wonder if theyll end up on their knees

begging me for their pardons nad please

I say the words no one wnat sme to say

They try to slide by everyday

Trying not to get caught when they lie

Perhaps, they arent as once they were, sly

Sends me in a crazed black out

filling my world with doubt

that whom I hold close

are less riends and prove to be more foes

I go walkin out in the woods

for dreams and worldly goods

Everything just has so much devastation

but we are under God as the nation.

I pray some of us are worth saving here

The Devil would have us slaves and our fears.

Demons touch our lives everyday

am i one? are you one? am i their queen of

plutonian shores to make you mine?

[paradox]

not bad, but dont feel compelled to conform to a rhyme scheme if it doesnt fit yer poem.

keep it up! :grin

[TomCat]

It's a good effort. Personally, rhyming is tougher for me., I just go free form prose.