bean Posted September 26, 2007 Posted September 26, 2007 External false grin internal disaster. Crimson line droplets behind closed doors. Self Destruction. 250...something bloody vomit - no escape.
Homicidalheathen Posted September 27, 2007 Posted September 27, 2007 How many teen girls (and/or other women) relate to this....... I am sure plenty. When did you write it?
Nienna Posted September 27, 2007 Posted September 27, 2007 I get it. I'm not sure what (else) to say... but I get it.
bean Posted September 28, 2007 Author Posted September 28, 2007 How many teen girls (and/or other women) relate to this....... I am sure plenty. When did you write it? the same night I posted it
the eternal Posted October 9, 2007 Posted October 9, 2007 Your poetry is amazing! I love that you're able to say so much with such brevity. What a wonderful skill to have. You suck! I'm jealous now. Great poem, as always
bean Posted October 9, 2007 Author Posted October 9, 2007 Your poetry is amazing! I love that you're able to say so much with such brevity. What a wonderful skill to have. You suck! I'm jealous now. Great poem, as always thanky
Destroit Posted October 13, 2007 Posted October 13, 2007 I like it 'cause it took me a second to get it. Like, at first when I started to read it I thought it was about something entirely different then the second time reading it through I was like "ooooh! I get it..." I also like it because I've been there.
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