Just One More Day

[DemolitionalizeLove]

Just One More Day

I shut my eyes and imagine what I see.

Nothing in my foresight

Nothing as it seems.

I toss and turn in my soft bed.

Trying to ignore

the aching of my head.

I have become a lady of sorrows.

How can this be?

Being unable to see all tomorrows.

Being unable to breathe.

I toss aside everything you say

Which I shall reveal tomorrow.

While screaming all that day.

This is my apology

I ask for your forgiveness.

I ask just to speak to you once more.

"Are you in this?"

With me as we march on through the parade.

Please, I ask of you

Just one more day.

[DemolitionalizeLove]

Guessing no one likes it or has read it...

[Scales]

It's alright. Not to be overly critical, but if it were me I'd revise it to give it more flow, or imagery. Either/or.

[DemolitionalizeLove]

Thanks, I seriously thought it sucked, but the website with my "decent" poetry, was down and that one was the only one I had on WordPad.. lmao

[Homicidalheathen]

I like it.

[torn asunder]

Guessing no one likes it or has read it...

it can take time for people to reply to posts in this forum - it doesn't mean nobody liked it!

[Homicidalheathen]

Yah there is a lot to cover, lots of new people these days......and thats a good thing.