We Manifest The Sinking Hand

[Scales]

Reason for edit: Taking this for a book.

[Rev.Reverence]

Dark, Deep& DARK

[Scales]

Thank you very much good sir. All the sh** going down in my life inspired this piece and I'm satisfied with it, even though I've wrote better.

[torn asunder]

i really thought the concepts it conveyed were interesting - i don't know a thing about prose, so i can't comment on it as such...

nice work, though!

[Scales]

Thanks. I kind of combine snippets of poetry, story, symbolism with my prose. I try to keep it free-form but give it meaning.