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The Dance Of Us


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The Dance Of Us

The warm breath of you

The lingering touch from you

The quiet smile from you

The hidden blush of you

The slow dance of us

The secret pleasurs from our love

The cherished memories with you

The beautiful gift from me

The beating heart from my chest

The quiet confession of love

The breath of fresh air

The sigh of relief

The shared moonlight

The dreaded good-bye

Then dawn comes

And we both turn to dust

Our love dances on the wind

We are but a fleeting memory

In the eyes of man

~Andrea Edwards

©04/15/2008

(the very last two lines popped into my head, and I used them at the end. I know they are from something else that someone else wrote, i just don't know where. If someone knows, let me know so that i can give them credit for it... Thanks)

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I like! Its almost sexy in a way(I cant think of a better word to use) it would be nice to feel that way about someone :)

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I like! Its almost sexy in a way(I cant think of a better word to use) it would be nice to feel that way about someone :)

?sensual?

  • 10 months later...
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I think I like this one best of yours so far.

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it is one of my favorites, as well. its one of the only one's that I am most satisfied with lol :)

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