GothicRavenGoddess (3) Posted April 16, 2008 Posted April 16, 2008 The Dance Of Us The warm breath of you The lingering touch from you The quiet smile from you The hidden blush of you The slow dance of us The secret pleasurs from our love The cherished memories with you The beautiful gift from me The beating heart from my chest The quiet confession of love The breath of fresh air The sigh of relief The shared moonlight The dreaded good-bye Then dawn comes And we both turn to dust Our love dances on the wind We are but a fleeting memory In the eyes of man ~Andrea Edwards ©04/15/2008 (the very last two lines popped into my head, and I used them at the end. I know they are from something else that someone else wrote, i just don't know where. If someone knows, let me know so that i can give them credit for it... Thanks)
predaking Posted April 17, 2008 Posted April 17, 2008 I like! Its almost sexy in a way(I cant think of a better word to use) it would be nice to feel that way about someone
Rev.Reverence Posted April 26, 2008 Posted April 26, 2008 I like! Its almost sexy in a way(I cant think of a better word to use) it would be nice to feel that way about someone ?sensual?
taysteewonderbunny Posted March 17, 2009 Posted March 17, 2009 I think I like this one best of yours so far.
GothicRavenGoddess (3) Posted March 17, 2009 Author Posted March 17, 2009 it is one of my favorites, as well. its one of the only one's that I am most satisfied with lol
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