Little Something

[ValleyOfMisery]

Death, come soon... i have suffered enough

Lock me up inside your heart

You worthless stupid fuck

Keep me chained, don t let me fade

Do what it takes to make me stay

Safe and warm in your veins

One heartbeat ... all it takes to feel me loving you

[hunhee]

this is really good.. fits my mood right now.. *sniffles*

[ValleyOfMisery]

*hugs*

i ll be the poison in your veins if you like lol

[n0Mad]

Ooo, ooo, sign me up!

[ValleyOfMisery]

*shoots up in your veins*

[Rev.Reverence]

Longer...and more! I like where you are coming from, and where you are going, I'ld like to know more about where your at when your writing...

Truely BRILLIANT FORM.

[ValleyOfMisery]

dunno what you really mean

just for the record this is like the first thing i v dedicated to a living person... all the other war in memory of someone that died

so that s a big progress for me

and it s the closes thing to a romantic poem

where i was when i wort this? in my living room typing it on my phone cuz i was to lazy to get up and find a pen and paper. after finding out that the man i love has found someone that makes him feel all the things i waned to do.. all the things i knew i could do