soothsayer Posted May 1, 2005 Posted May 1, 2005 I wrote this for my daughter. Another night came and went without you I sat here and thought about calling I longed to hear your voice again When will this suffering end? Another day came and went without you I went about my day thinking of you I thought about the things we might have shared I wondered if you knew how much I really cared? Another moment in life came and went without you It seemed to fill the void that your absence brings I thought about how you smiled and laughed But the silence that surrounded me could not be broken I drew another picture just for you today But you're not here to enjoy what I labored for in vain I stopped myself from shedding a tear Even though no one is here to witness my pain A dream about you came and went last night It was so beautiful to see you once more But when I awoke I was reminded of how alone I was I almost believed you would be waiting at my door I want you to know how much I love you And someday what is wrong will no longer be I miss you like no other before or since Because in my heart you'll always be with me
FarrIL Posted May 1, 2005 Posted May 1, 2005 That's really pretty, I like the flow of the words and the concept. Nicely done, Sooth. ;D
soothsayer Posted May 1, 2005 Author Posted May 1, 2005 Thank you. I sat down and within 3 minutes it was done. I have really bared my soul with this. These are all my thoughts and feelings and they just poured out and I couldn't have stopped them if I had wanted too.
soothsayer Posted May 1, 2005 Author Posted May 1, 2005 Still makes me feel that way too every time I have read it today.
soothsayer Posted May 2, 2005 Author Posted May 2, 2005 Thanks Paradox. Actually I thought you might rub my nose in the fact that I wrote a poem. You didn't.
paradox Posted May 2, 2005 Posted May 2, 2005 no. i write poems too. and i have a daughter. i can relate.
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