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I wrote this for my daughter.

Another night came and went without you

I sat here and thought about calling

I longed to hear your voice again

When will this suffering end?

Another day came and went without you

I went about my day thinking of you

I thought about the things we might have shared

I wondered if you knew how much I really cared?

Another moment in life came and went without you

It seemed to fill the void that your absence brings

I thought about how you smiled and laughed

But the silence that surrounded me could not be broken

I drew another picture just for you today

But you're not here to enjoy what I labored for in vain

I stopped myself from shedding a tear

Even though no one is here to witness my pain

A dream about you came and went last night

It was so beautiful to see you once more

But when I awoke I was reminded of how alone I was

I almost believed you would be waiting at my door

I want you to know how much I love you

And someday what is wrong will no longer be

I miss you like no other before or since

Because in my heart you'll always be with me

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That's really pretty, I like the flow of the words and the concept.

Nicely done, Sooth. ;D

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Thank you. I sat down and within 3 minutes it was done. I have really bared my soul with this. These are all my thoughts and feelings and they just poured out and I couldn't have stopped them if I had wanted too.

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=(

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Still makes me feel that way too every time I have read it today.

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:tear

beautiful

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Thanks Paradox. Actually I thought you might rub my nose in the fact that I wrote a poem. You didn't.

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no. i write poems too. and i have a daughter.

i can relate.

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Again, thanks.

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