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Brenda Starrr

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Run your fingers through my soft, dark hair

Kiss my smooth pink lips

Feel my hand run down your back

Right to the sway of your hips

Turn out the lights, and don't tell a soul

It's okay, it's just us

I don't care if the bed isn't made

It's just you, me, and our lust

After all is said and done

After the long, hard day is complete

Once all has become quiet and still

In the dark, all alone, we will meet

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I forget the rules, but is that a sonet? It's quite beautiful.

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I like it, but you could've just PMed me with it. :wink

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I like it, but you could've just PMed me with it.  :wink

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lol!

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I like it, but you could've just PMed me with it.  :wink

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How 'bout I just send you a nude pic and we call it a day?

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Would you? That'd be really sweet! :tongue:

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Anything for the sake of art, or Jeff.

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anyway, I'm sure it could be a sonnet, easily if you wanted...

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Thank you!

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Anything for the sake of art, or Jeff.

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That's why I choose photography (nudes & Superbitch magazine) as an outlet for my creative side. It gives me an opportunity to reach out and share perspectives that often are missed (Wow, look at how far she gets those legs back behind her head) by those caught up in the day to day rat race (Plus i get to see hot chicks). It means so much to me to give back all that I've been blessed with in life (Do you think maybe i'll "hit" some of that ass some day??) If I can just touch one person (in dirty places) and inspire them or lift up their spirits (or skirts), that's reward enough for me (can you believe the tits on that chick?)

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Nah ahhh. You choose to do nudes so that you can check out naked babes without getting slapped for it. Give us some credit....daaaang!

  • 2 weeks later...
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Sonnets are always 14 lines. English sonnets have 3 quatrains (abab cdcd efef) and then a heroic coulet.

.....whoa. That is an ancient memory from AP English that came from somewhere deep in my brain.

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Always gotta wreck it for others, don't ya?

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Brenda, if you want it to be a sonnet, then dammit...a sonnet it is!

It's beautiful. Just wish I had seen it sooner. :blushing

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Thank you, DC!

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it is very beautiful thank you for sharing.

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Thank you!

  • 10 months later...
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Bump!

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another beautiful write... I love reading writes from people such as you, people that can pull off rhyming schemes so seamlessly, not making a bit of it sound forced.

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Thank you. That's quite flattering.

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