Brenda Starrr Posted May 2, 2005 Posted May 2, 2005 Run your fingers through my soft, dark hair Kiss my smooth pink lips Feel my hand run down your back Right to the sway of your hips Turn out the lights, and don't tell a soul It's okay, it's just us I don't care if the bed isn't made It's just you, me, and our lust After all is said and done After the long, hard day is complete Once all has become quiet and still In the dark, all alone, we will meet
Paper Hearts Posted May 2, 2005 Posted May 2, 2005 I forget the rules, but is that a sonet? It's quite beautiful.
JaneDead Posted May 2, 2005 Posted May 2, 2005 I like it, but you could've just PMed me with it. <{POST_SNAPBACK}> lol!
Brenda Starrr Posted May 2, 2005 Author Posted May 2, 2005 I like it, but you could've just PMed me with it. <{POST_SNAPBACK}> How 'bout I just send you a nude pic and we call it a day?
Paper Hearts Posted May 2, 2005 Posted May 2, 2005 anyway, I'm sure it could be a sonnet, easily if you wanted...
TomCat Posted May 2, 2005 Posted May 2, 2005 Anything for the sake of art, or Jeff. <{POST_SNAPBACK}> That's why I choose photography (nudes & Superbitch magazine) as an outlet for my creative side. It gives me an opportunity to reach out and share perspectives that often are missed (Wow, look at how far she gets those legs back behind her head) by those caught up in the day to day rat race (Plus i get to see hot chicks). It means so much to me to give back all that I've been blessed with in life (Do you think maybe i'll "hit" some of that ass some day??) If I can just touch one person (in dirty places) and inspire them or lift up their spirits (or skirts), that's reward enough for me (can you believe the tits on that chick?)
Brenda Starrr Posted May 3, 2005 Author Posted May 3, 2005 Nah ahhh. You choose to do nudes so that you can check out naked babes without getting slapped for it. Give us some credit....daaaang!
SomeDanGuy Posted May 12, 2005 Posted May 12, 2005 Sonnets are always 14 lines. English sonnets have 3 quatrains (abab cdcd efef) and then a heroic coulet. .....whoa. That is an ancient memory from AP English that came from somewhere deep in my brain.
Brenda Starrr Posted May 13, 2005 Author Posted May 13, 2005 Always gotta wreck it for others, don't ya?
DarkenedCharm Posted May 13, 2005 Posted May 13, 2005 Brenda, if you want it to be a sonnet, then dammit...a sonnet it is! It's beautiful. Just wish I had seen it sooner. :blushing
The Rod Posted April 3, 2006 Posted April 3, 2006 another beautiful write... I love reading writes from people such as you, people that can pull off rhyming schemes so seamlessly, not making a bit of it sound forced.
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