A Song I Wrote

[Nightgaunt]

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You’re a faith disease,

Divine crisis of soul.

In an Age of Lies,

You’re the Truth I’m told.

You’re the Angel of Death,

You’re the bearer of light,

You’re the render of flesh

In the war-torn night.

I want to curl up inside you

And kiss your blood and bones.

You’re the one sure thing,

You’re a shot in the dark,

You’re the Valley of Death,

You’re a walk in the park.

You’re the leather and lace,

You’re the cruel intent,

You’re the faith misplaced,

You’re my time misspent,

And when I gather you in,

I can catch the scent of your sorrow.

Oh let’s run away tonight

To our cavern on the bad side of town.

We can watch our words take flight

From our lair deep underground.

’Cause you’re a parasite

Growing fat inside me,

You’re a hot wind blowing

Through the Sephirothic Tree,

And I don’t know where

This twisted street will lead -

To sacrifice or infinity.

You’re so beautiful to me baby,

’Cause you’re dying inside.

[e-jewell]

Wow, I'm completely useless to you. I'm sorry but I happen to get off on rhyming and you rhyme this perfectly and fluidly. Since it has it's own rhythm and the words are so quick and sharp, it's not even boring to me... and I usually get bored without flowery language.

Sorry... can't be improved as far as I'm concerned.

[TheGimp]

i like it a lot great job

[Scales]

I'd like to hear it to music.

[gothkytten (2)]

nice