bled_dry Posted August 1, 2008 Posted August 1, 2008 I thought some might enjoy this. --July is Over-- Watching the few inescapable moments Of crimson streaks across the sky I thought of magnificent carnality Licking the blade I let out a sigh It'll never be me at the end of your whip Staring up in adoration; alive Propelled to my edges then torn Falling back in your arms being born I must confess this shocking note Without hesitation I would sign With all loves' desperation I would bet Her skin does not part like mine Hope you all like it!
Rev.Reverence Posted August 3, 2008 Posted August 3, 2008 Come read it to us...I like it...but, I prefer to hear poetry. Gives a deeper look into the soul.
bled_dry Posted August 4, 2008 Author Posted August 4, 2008 this one stands out.... well done Thanks!
bled_dry Posted August 4, 2008 Author Posted August 4, 2008 Come read it to us...I like it...but, I prefer to hear poetry.Gives a deeper look into the soul. Thanks, but I don't know where to come to read. Where is the coffee house? Help a girl out! lol.
Raev Posted August 4, 2008 Posted August 4, 2008 Again, I suspect I know where that is aimed. I soon plan on visiting said coffee house, Sundays aye?
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