My Attempt at Songwriting

[Brenda Starrr]

She knows it gets hot in there

The spark she has inside

Not sure if she can care for it

She can run, but cannot hide

He knows that matches burn real deep

And gasoline can cause fire

Not sure if the two should ever mix

But imagines it making him higher

(Chorus)

You know that fire is not a toy

I know, as I have learned

Because if you've ever played with fire

You know, you can get burned

The distance between the heat and flame

Will keep the fire low

But fantasies and make believe

Could cause that fire to grow

The fantasies of meeting up

In an unfamiliar place

Is like the match to the pack

The hands upon the face

(Chorus)

You know that fire is not a toy

I know, as I have learned

Because if you've ever played with fire

You know, you can get burned

Bodies twisted head to toe

Like iron in the heat

Beautiful art in the flesh

Causes hearts to vibrantly beat

And when it all is said and done

Life beckons once again

Reality sets in on you

All things come to an end

(Chorus)

You know that fire is not a toy

I know, as I have learned

Because if you've ever played with fire

You know, you can get burned

[DarkenedCharm]

Wow...

You should find someone to put that to music, Brenda. Know what is funny? I have felt that way a time or two in my life.

GREAT lyrics.

[Brenda Starrr]

Thanks. My ex husband plays with Everclear and Third Eye Blind sometimes, but I fear that he will say that he wrote them. We would have to end the friendship.

[Paper Hearts]

it's very nice.

[DarkenedCharm]

No shit??? That's awesome!!! But yeah...You don't want him claiming THOSE lyrics as his own, for sure...

[Brenda Starrr]

For real. He also hangs with Cheap Trick and Glen Phillips from Toad The Wet Sprocket. Funny how this shit started AFTER I left him.

DAMMITDAMMITDAMMIT

[DarkenedCharm]

For real. He also hangs with Cheap Trick and Glen Phillips from Toad The Wet Sprocket. Funny how this shit started AFTER I left him.

DAMMITDAMMITDAMMIT

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Sheesh...Isn't that always the way luck runs?

[Brenda Starrr]

I'm afraid that it is....

However, he has gotten me autographs from Steven Tyler, Joe Perry, Glen Phillips.

I'm still waiting for Artie, Robin Zander and Stephen Jenkins. This would be because I'm a good mom and a decent person. :whistling

[soothsayer]

I like it!

[torn asunder]

i love the images this paints, but i've never been good at seeing lyrics...

[Brenda Starrr]

Thanks!

[TomCat]

Not bad rabbit, not bad at all...

[Brenda Starrr]

Werd, yo.

[Soulrev]

Bahahaha ROFL ROFL ROFL LMAO..

-=waiting to finally die=-

[Brenda Starrr]

STFU!

[Rev.Reverence]

my favorite so far I need a smoke & a pancake...

...well just the smoke will do...I feel to lazy to cook right now

[Brenda Starrr]

LMAO....pancakes