The Five Senses

[Brenda Starrr]

Go ahead and touch me

I might just come alive

Give it all you possibly have

For I will fuel your drive

Go ahead and see me

You might like what you find

Take a peek and check me out

For I won't make you blind

Go ahead and hear me

I'll whisper all my thoughts

Lean your ear down by my lips

I swear I'll make you hot

Go ahead and smell me

My fragrance warm as Spring

You should really take the time

To enjoy all it will bring

Go ahead and taste me

You'll find I'm sweet as wine

Brush upon my silky skin

You'll want me all the time

[Paper Hearts]

-would make a hell of an invitation card preamble...i like it.

[Brenda Starrr]

LOL...

Thank you!

[soothsayer]

Yea ~ it made me think of a certain activity I love to do. Very good deary.

[Brenda Starrr]

Thank you!

[DarkenedCharm]

I think I will be finding myself a corner now.

[paradox]

cool. though i might make a suggestion. work up thru the sense from a distance to closeness.

ie, you started with touch and then went to seeing. what if you go, say, sight,/hearing 1st and 2nd, then smell, touch and then taste?

that way, you work closer and closer in in a physical sense. i think it could heighten the effect.

[Brenda Starrr]

Let me get back to you on that.

*thumps paradox on the head....the big one

[paradox]

ow!

whatd i do?!? :blink