bean Posted February 17, 2009 Posted February 17, 2009 Fetid. Cold blue orbs, Graying strands. Rotted mouth Spews hatred. Serrated words Scream toxins. Anger burns. No mercy. Unforgiving Soulless bitch. Heartless mind Deteriorates joy. Bitter cell Traps bigotry. Fantastic narcissism Thy kingdom. Lonely death. Hellfire burns.
Enishi Posted February 19, 2009 Posted February 19, 2009 Nice. It has a feeling of self-hate turning into external hate.
bean Posted February 19, 2009 Author Posted February 19, 2009 Thank you I like your take on the poem too!
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