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Fetid.

Cold blue orbs,

Graying strands.

Rotted mouth

Spews hatred.

Serrated words

Scream toxins.

Anger burns.

No mercy.

Unforgiving

Soulless bitch.

Heartless mind

Deteriorates joy.

Bitter cell

Traps bigotry.

Fantastic narcissism

Thy kingdom.

Lonely death.

Hellfire burns.

Enishi Newbie

Enishi

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Nice. :)

It has a feeling of self-hate turning into external hate.

bean Newbie

bean

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Thank you :)

I like your take on the poem too!

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