Untouchable

[Brenda Starrr]

I thought I saw you today,

Across a crowded room.

You may think, bad cliche'

But, I swear that it's true.

I called out your name,

But you didn't hear me.

As I tried to get closer,

You walked away from me.

I tried to reach for you,

But you moved further away.

So, I turned and walked from you.

Dejected and distant,

I went on my way home.

[Slept with ghost]

very very nice bren your poems are one of the things i have enjoyed most since signing up on this site

[Brenda Starrr]

Thank you, Dave. You're so sweet!

[DarkenedCharm]

Yet another song lyric - worthy piece...

DAMN you are good!!!

[Nienna]

Yeah, it is lyric worthy! I like it!

[Sybil]

(sigh)

another piece of yours that i got all emotional over...

people.. we are such a piece of work..

(is this about someone specific or just a feeling you've had before.. i am curious..)

[Guest Megalicious]

Thats sad bren =( but i can relate to it which is sad really .....

[Brenda Starrr]

It's actually about looking for something or someone and just not being able to find it. And then, just as you're almost close enough to touch it or them, it just goes away. It's happened in the past to me. Then I quit looking. Wayne found me.