this ones not to good

[Slept with ghost]

Have you even fallen for miles she asked as she looked into his eye’s just falling with a empty feeling inside as if at some point in your life you were on top of the world and now your on the way back down. Have you ever fallen for days she asked as she looked into his heart like there nothing left for you in this world and its slowly taking you apart. Have you ever fallen for weeks she asked as she looked into his soul as you tell someone that you love them but how much they will never know. I have been falling for months now he said as he looked into her mind I fear I may never hit bottom and I don’t know what to do I get the felling im falling every time I look at you.

[Brenda Starrr]

Dave, who told you that this sucks?

[Slept with ghost]

i did i dont like the way it flows

[Brenda Starrr]

It SO doesn't suck.