When You......

[Brenda Starrr]

When you tell me you want me

It sends chills down my spine

And makes me feel like flying

As if no one else exists on Earth

When you tell me you need me

I feel so warm inside

And it makes me feel so safe

As if no one could ever hurt me

When you tell me you believe in me

It makes me think I'm invincible

Like all I can do is good in your eyes

And I feel more whole than ever

When you tell me you love me

I know that it's the truth

Because I see it in your eyes

And I can feel it in your soul

[torn asunder]

very good =)

but god, it makes me sad... =(

[Brenda Starrr]

Thank you, and I'm sorry...... =(

[soothsayer]

As odd as it may sound, sad lyrics/writing has a way of lifting me up. I dunno how or why but it does. Brenda, you're becoming very, very good. I like this one.

[Black Sunday9]

how often do you write poems Brenda?

[Brenda Starrr]

Just whenever things pop into my head. More often lately.

[torn asunder]

when i first saw this one, it struck me - you really seem to be coming into your own with your writing recently... very impressed!

[Brenda Starrr]

:blushing

Thank you.

:blushing

[torn asunder]

... i'm jealous, too... :fear

[Brenda Starrr]

... i'm jealous, too...  :fear 

<{POST_SNAPBACK}>

You can't be! I was motivated because you write some of the most touching and beautiful poetry ever!

:blushing

[torn asunder]

honestly, i haven't really liked any of the stuff i've done recently... (one of the reasons you haven't seen much from me recently) on the other hand, i'm liking yours more & more.

[Brenda Starrr]

I love your work. Love it. I'm going to admit that the things that you write affect me in some way. You're that good.