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Monkeys Are Eating My Brain


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I'm melting!.........

into a pile of mush

seeping into the sky below.

green spheres with black centres

bounce off empty walls,

landing on rectangular water.

faded red wine cork screws float through air

touching down on undefined shapes.

tornado screams rip through oblivion

calming down to terrifying whispers.

thunderous beating all around followed by

muffled mumbling.

midnight ooze dripping over white

landing on green flesh

penetrating grey wrinkles.

KABOOM!

dynamite explosion

maroon paint everywhere

chunks of grey matter smush

against the maroon liquid

falling

falling

falling

thump.

heavy bones pull together

My brain contains itself.

  • 5 months later...
Posted

Is this one of your poems where each line tells a different story?

or are these the thoughts that go through ones head as monkeys eat their brain?

The imagery is quite vivid

Posted

It was written during an acid trip when I was 14 or 15 lol. I will explain what each line is supposed to be, if you want.

Posted

I see a little Dorthy in there along with the Wicked Witch and her monkeys....and then a terrific suicide with an explosion of colors against the wall....... :fear

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