bean Posted June 8, 2005 Posted June 8, 2005 I'm melting!......... into a pile of mush seeping into the sky below. green spheres with black centres bounce off empty walls, landing on rectangular water. faded red wine cork screws float through air touching down on undefined shapes. tornado screams rip through oblivion calming down to terrifying whispers. thunderous beating all around followed by muffled mumbling. midnight ooze dripping over white landing on green flesh penetrating grey wrinkles. KABOOM! dynamite explosion maroon paint everywhere chunks of grey matter smush against the maroon liquid falling falling falling thump. heavy bones pull together My brain contains itself.
the eternal Posted November 11, 2005 Posted November 11, 2005 Is this one of your poems where each line tells a different story? or are these the thoughts that go through ones head as monkeys eat their brain? The imagery is quite vivid
bean Posted November 12, 2005 Author Posted November 12, 2005 It was written during an acid trip when I was 14 or 15 lol. I will explain what each line is supposed to be, if you want.
Mikielikesit Posted November 13, 2005 Posted November 13, 2005 I see a little Dorthy in there along with the Wicked Witch and her monkeys....and then a terrific suicide with an explosion of colors against the wall....... :fear
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