Brenda Starrr Posted June 23, 2005 Posted June 23, 2005 She sighed deeply as he softly spoke, Telling her all she needed to hear. Stroking her mind, but wanting his touch. She listened and felt no fear. All alone, yet his presence felt She listens intently to him She longs for his breath upon her neck. She wants him. It's not just a whim. He tells her all of his fantasies She knows he wants the same things To feel her, touch her, hold her, taste her And all of the joy that they'll bring.
torn asunder Posted June 23, 2005 Posted June 23, 2005 reminds me of phone convos i've had in the past - paints a very good mental image, one of my fave things in a poem! nice!
Homicidalheathen Posted June 27, 2005 Posted June 27, 2005 BRENDA STOP TRYING TO MAKE ME CRY DAMN YOU (this is a good compliment to your verse by the way) She sighed deeply as he softly spoke,Telling her all she needed to hear. Stroking her mind, but wanting his touch. She listened and felt no fear. All alone, yet his presence felt She listens intently to him She longs for his breath upon her neck. She wants him. It's not just a whim. He tells her all of his fantasies She knows he wants the same things To feel her, touch her, hold her, taste her And all of the joy that they'll bring. <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
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