Bleed

[bean]

Ruby red lips

Utter lies.

Pleading, yearning -

Promising the impossible.

Devoted fans carve their name -

Willing flesh bleeds their love.

[the eternal]

Ruby red lips

Utter lies.

Pleading, yearning -

Promising the impossible.

Devoted fans carve their name -

Willing flesh bleeds their love.

ooh another good one!

I love your endings.

can always count on those to give an extra punch

[bean]

Thanks! That's funny, I always thought my endings were weak. Maybe not?

[the eternal]

your endings are often blunt and take a turn somewhere the poem wasnt quite going

I like the way it shakes things up