Lacilliyr Posted August 22, 2011 Posted August 22, 2011 Death consumes. Time erases. All that you are is to be Death's own, Dust must return to dust. All that you were belongs to Time, Who will forget all that was. You will survive neither. For all your efforts, You will perish into nothing. ~Love Lace --- This poem was written mainly to fight into my XBL GT Bio. As I perused other's bios, I noticed the same thing; "Me Me Me, I'm so great, I'm God." I've met people in person who thought themselves to be gods themselves. Suffice it to say, I grew tired of such over inflated egos. So they became my inspiration for my little poem. It aint much, but I like reminding the over egotistical just how small they really are.
havoc Posted August 22, 2011 Posted August 22, 2011 love it but i would remove the last "all" because you used it twice already and it would work to give finality to the ending.just my 2 cents
Lacilliyr Posted August 22, 2011 Author Posted August 22, 2011 Hehehe thanks, I'll mull it over n.n Jis a little poem I wrote up. xD
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