bean Posted June 30, 2005 Posted June 30, 2005 Sunday I am scum, lower than dog shit stuck to my shoe. I am nothing. Sharp steel drags across my skin on Monday, hoping to feel something more than this misery. Tuesday’s river of sorrow falls into hopelessness. Indifference greets me on Wednesday. Thursday brings intensity. Euphoria sets in as my mind races. New Ideas, Big Plans. There Is No Time For Sleep. Empty liquor bottles highlight Friday - I am a goddess and you will worship me. On Saturday I am a whore, fucking that stranger in the back seat of my car. This never ending cycle is all to familiar - Where is my Lithium?
Amerist Posted July 2, 2005 Posted July 2, 2005 I like how the prose makes it look like there's a hollow hole in the middle of the poem -- on Thursday. Well, I also like how thy week goes "over the hump," it grinds up a hill like Sisiphys pushing the boulder, but it peaks and goes rolling out of control, tumbling mania.
the eternal Posted November 11, 2005 Posted November 11, 2005 Funny Ive known you months pomba and never met her. Yeah, I like the arc of the poem too, as if the energy is opposite of a normal poem, with the negative expanding and threatening to swallow the page until euphoria hits and your pen of despair is beaten back until weekend comes. Another great one
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