Beautiful Nightmare

[bean]

Sweet dreams

Beautiful nightmares

Twist and turn.

Slumber body

unaware

of the subconscious

trickery.

Awaken to fear,

to lust,

to hatred,

to involuntary reactions.

Hazy mind tries

to understand

this life,

this dream,

this nightmare.

[Scary Guy]

Reminds me of Ayria - Horrible Dream

Then Cooper comes to mind too.

[Brenda Starrr]

As usual, BW.....I love it!

[Amerist]

Here, here: Insomnia. ...and any creative efforts brought to fruition by it.

[bean]

Thanks everyone...it was kinda funny...I feel asleep not too long after I posted the poem.

[bean]

Reminds me of Ayria - Horrible Dream

Then Cooper comes to mind too.

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I don't read other people's poetry except for what gets posted on this site, so there' s no influence.

[Amerist]

Thanks everyone...it was kinda funny...I feel asleep not too long after I posted the poem.

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It probably just needed to be posted in order to be sated. Remember, most gods require sacrifies, even Soma who seems to be working for Calypso.

[Scary Guy]

I don't read other people's poetry except for what gets posted on this site, so there' s no influence.

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It's poetry set to harmony (music).

Alice Cooper's "Welcome to my Nightmare" is what I was thinking of. I wasn't implying that you stole it at all, though these days it is hard to have an original thought.

[bean]

It's poetry set to harmony (music).

Alice Cooper's "Welcome to my Nightmare" is what I was thinking of.  I wasn't implying that you stole it at all, though these days it is hard to have an original thought.

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Ooops, lol, it didn't dawn on me that you were referring to Alice Cooper..haven't heard that song in a long time...and yes, origional though is hard to come by, lol

[Scary Guy]

I happen to have it on vinyl :D

Like I said normally I don't read poetry. It should be assumed if I'm refering to anything it is either music or computer related.

[the eternal]

I start to wonder sometimes if all my cool original thoughts were done a thousand times before

in a more intellectual and meaningful way

in French

when someone was bored and just threw out the least important thought on their mind that day

Anyway, not the case here. I liked it a lot