urban nightmare

[vampgirl21]

I lay my head down in this place.

This place filled with greed ,lust,and hate.

How all you see if the green leaf trees and the bling-bling of a man trying to catch a girls eye.

How they try and try as leave there children cold and hungry never wanting to hear them cry.

Like leaving a baby deer in the middle of a wolf pack the wonder these urban jungel roads never looking back.

The skys in these jungels are always black like the great black bear ready to attack.

And how angry birds cry like thunder in the sky tell me how do i escape this urban nightmare?

P.s. so you know i suck at spelling so forgive me for it . =)

[Amerist]

...and the birds cry like thunder in the sky.

That was a nice ending.

[Mikielikesit]

cool

[Homicidalheathen]

I just want ya all to know I love the poetry posted on this site even though I don't always comment.

Very well done indeed.

[float]

awesome

[Brenda Starrr]

Pretty damned good.