Lost in You

[bean]

Long forgotten

this soul of deep -

traveling without

direction,

aimlessly tumbling

through times

mapped in history.

Unknown to some,

misinterpreted by others.

Pull me from the depths,

dust me off -

read everything

there is to know.

Lose yourself

in all that I am -

escape to this land

where there is no time -

no space,

just us.

[Mikielikesit]

wow that is way cool ....ahh to be lost in you

[soothsayer]

Very cool.

[bean]

Thanks

[the eternal]

I love the ending. This is the kind of poem that I think would change depending on the mood someones.

Im feeling quite hollow today, so I view it from a point of admiring detachment.

I must return again sometime

[bean]

I promise I won't get pissy and go deleating all my poems again so you can return to this as often as you like.

[the eternal]

:grin