poems

[Adriel1]

here is some poetry I wrote a few years ago what do you guys think?

(Moon light)

The moon light

shines down all

things that live

in the dark.

Thier blood cold

thier eyes pale

teeth gleaming

Deathi s sweet

and blissful.

(dark place)

Black shadows in dark places

men in robes with grim faces

evil hands ready to kill

mortal flesh made still

sharp torture in mind

blood ink wrote a sign

on the alter blood dripping

black cup set for dipping

evil spirits forever below

the dak places with black shadows.

(1 I thought up as I wrote this thread)

Is truth greater than hope?

hope is a fullfilling thing

that has strength and life

truth is a sword and shield

one protecting the other

causes pain and great fear

[soothsayer]

My fav is dark place. Very cool.

[Adriel1]

ty :grin

[Homicidalheathen]

I like the Dark Places one....as Phee would say.....yer goth. :cheerful