Angel of the Night

[Adriel1]

this is something I've been working on for a while.

Angel of the night

with her red cloak on

gleaming eyes, darken hair

She hunts under the stars and moon

Her victim is waiting

Death is swift in her arms

Crushing her lover

so sweet and alive

Now dust and nothing

Angel of the night

with her red cloak on

her kiss is deadly

her love is greater

She walks in the herd

of her fleshy feasts

Alone walking the night

the cascade of life wanes

She cries out in delight

"I will drink you all till death"

The fleshy scream in agony

She sings amonst the gore

Angel of the night

drinks her next lover

Angel of the night

she meets the dead

She eyes them all

fearing at first

then loving them

The dead surround her

kisses and bites

The king of the dead

comes the the angel

They embrace and kiss

"You are mine, my love"

she sings in his ear

The dead sing

gleaming eyes

Angel of the night

loves them all

She embraces thier welcome

love is grand

her loneliness dies

The sun rises

all colors of the day

bleed over the dead

They burn and cry

The king of the dead cries his tears

Angel of the night

awakes under the stars

She sees the dead

gone from her

She weeps

She leaves her home

Lifetimes pass by

Angel of the night

her red cloak ripped

so tired

Alone

Still she walks

under the stars and moon

Angel of the night

her tears flow still

Her cloak blazing

She smiles at death

and welcomes it.

[Draco1958]

Wow, don't know what else to say. This is good, really good. Met a lady at Motor City Comic Con, she wrote several poems, printed them out and was selling them. I bought a copy, excellent stuff. I think you should consider doing that.

[Adriel1]

ty I have tried to publish it a few times then I stopped for awhile I got it published in one of those poetry contests but thats about it. Maybe I should try a magazine of a chap book. Any suggestions?

[Draco1958]

What the young lady did was have it printed herself and sold it at a comic con among other places. Her name is Dorenda. You may be able to check some of her stuff out at www.jcscomicstop.com