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Struggle-some yet worry free

Off balance yet trouble-free

Got my debts and payments due

But honestly, I dont fret as much as you

I've got my problems, you have yours

I've organized mine behind specific doors

Yours pile up and up

..... Dig through your rubble

Try to tower over me

..... Keep me in your rubber bubble

I've got a needle, one you never found

I pop it without a sound

You lack the common ground

On which my senses bounce around

Your adult is my child

To your mind, I'm untamed and wild

Struggle-some yet worry free

Off balance,

But that's just me.

  • 2 weeks later...
Posted

Pretty interesting.

Sounds like you been having debt trouble.

Posted

Please don't take offense to this but it could work as a commercial jingle. I say, sell it to some ad firm.

  • 2 weeks later...
Posted

No offense taken!! =P

I dont have any debt trouble, it's just that I dont make enough money for a lot of things. But at the same time, I dont let it stress me, like it stresses my mom and stepdad. They take everything on at once and I take my stuff on little by little, to help alleviate the stress.

Apparently, that isnt adult-like. oO

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YAY! NO STRESS!!

Mew.

:cat:

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YAY! NO STRESS!!

Mew.

:cat:

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KITTY!!!

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KITTY!!!

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Purrrrrrrr...........Mew.

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honestly, i don't see the jingle aspect!? i really dig the point of view, i'm just getting back to it myself, this past year or two. keep popping their bubble, is all i can say!! :wink great write! :happy:

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