FarrIL Posted October 4, 2005 Posted October 4, 2005 Struggle-some yet worry free Off balance yet trouble-free Got my debts and payments due But honestly, I dont fret as much as you I've got my problems, you have yours I've organized mine behind specific doors Yours pile up and up ..... Dig through your rubble Try to tower over me ..... Keep me in your rubber bubble I've got a needle, one you never found I pop it without a sound You lack the common ground On which my senses bounce around Your adult is my child To your mind, I'm untamed and wild Struggle-some yet worry free Off balance, But that's just me.
DarkChylde Posted October 13, 2005 Posted October 13, 2005 Pretty interesting. Sounds like you been having debt trouble.
soothsayer Posted October 13, 2005 Posted October 13, 2005 Please don't take offense to this but it could work as a commercial jingle. I say, sell it to some ad firm.
FarrIL Posted October 24, 2005 Author Posted October 24, 2005 No offense taken!! I dont have any debt trouble, it's just that I dont make enough money for a lot of things. But at the same time, I dont let it stress me, like it stresses my mom and stepdad. They take everything on at once and I take my stuff on little by little, to help alleviate the stress. Apparently, that isnt adult-like. oO
FarrIL Posted October 24, 2005 Author Posted October 24, 2005 YAY! NO STRESS!! Mew. <{POST_SNAPBACK}> KITTY!!!
Moonlight_Phantasy Posted October 24, 2005 Posted October 24, 2005 KITTY!!! <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Purrrrrrrr...........Mew.
torn asunder Posted October 25, 2005 Posted October 25, 2005 honestly, i don't see the jingle aspect!? i really dig the point of view, i'm just getting back to it myself, this past year or two. keep popping their bubble, is all i can say!! great write!
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