Chills

[Brenda Starrr]

If I were to touch you

There, in your room

Would I send chills down your spine?

Would I make you want to hold me all night

Basking in the afterglow?

If I were to blow your mind

There, in your nakedness

Would you want so much more?

Would you want to do it all over

Again and again until

The chills subside?

[torn asunder]

wow - very nice!

[Brenda Starrr]

Thanks, TA. That means a lot coming from you. I also think I just need some good lovin'. :

[torn asunder]

i would draw that conclusion, as well... seriously, any time someone can paint images in my head with their words, and make me *feel* what they're saying, i like it - and this definitely did that! (of course, now i need to find some of that, too!!) :laughing:

[Brenda Starrr]

Wow. I did goooooooooooooooooood

[JaneDead]

hehe i was thinking what ta was saying... i got some visuals too.. but not of you brenda so don't worry.

[Brenda Starrr]

What??? Am I not hot enough for you?

[JaneDead]

oh not that is not it at all... ok next time i read it i will think of you.. and me.. and phee lol how's that? *wink wink*

[Brenda Starrr]

Ahhhh, yes....our DGN threesome. If it keeps up, it could become a gangbang.

[JaneDead]

well i know troy will probably want some of that action.. so yeah... better rest up for that one

[Brenda Starrr]

Amazing how a poem about passionate lovemaking will conjure up thoughts of Troy. :laughing:

[torn asunder]

:ermm: alright, you two, get a room, ok!? sheeesh!!

[Brenda Starrr]

lol........

Are you joining us?

[JaneDead]

well actually i was not thinking of troy personally i just know how he is and i know he would want in. he is the pimp ya know.

[torn asunder]

lol........

Are you joining us? 

:clover: :grin:

[Brenda Starrr]

I'm reading that as you'd be a lucky devil and very happy? :

[JaneDead]

black sunday might join in too... that is if we are all hot enough for him

[Brenda Starrr]

My poem has spawned a cluster f*ck!

[torn asunder]

My poem has spawned a cluster f*ck!

rotflmfao!!!

[Brenda Starrr]

I've always wanted to "fit in" somewhere. Maybe evern start something. Looks like I did.....

The DGN Cluster F*ck!!!!

[Brenda Starrr]

Bump!

[The Rod]

excellent work Brenda... Quite the short write, but it does get its point across quite magnificently. And I love the innuendo...