No More Pain

[Brenda Starrr]

The sky is so dark and cold

I cannot get warm at all

Please lie down beside me

Wrap your arms and legs around me

Let me feel your breath upon me

I will do the same

I will warm you head to toe

My warm arms and legs will let you know

That I am living, I am breathing

There is no more pain

[torn asunder]

very good, but left me a bit sad... keep posting, i love to see others' work!

[Brenda Starrr]

It can be taken as either sad or hopeful, really. It's all in what you see in it.

[JaneDead]

i saw it as more hopeful actually

[Marblez]

Yes, too hopeful for someone who has lost their most recent possibility. I think that is where he was coming from.