A selection from my poetry

[The Rod]

Degression

minutes turn into hours

into days

a word of encouragement

now only spurs a moment of regretful reflection

destiny wavers

did i lose the path?

happiness is too much of a strain

when every corner turned screams of sorrow

the sun's lost its gleam

flowers appear dull and lifeless

sunsets become only remindings of a hopeful end

a look in the mirror reveals only a shell

no longer is there a soul behind those eyes

only the ones who are fulfilled

are supposed to look forward to death

'try' becomes 'give up'

a smile turns into a frown

and beauty is no longer found in this world

the flame that is life wavers

and is blown out

everything is black

[Brenda Starrr]

That's sad, Brian.

[The Rod]

I'll attempt a more up-beat poem next time... I know not everyone likes to read these downer ones...

[Brenda Starrr]

It's actually refreshing. All of mine are really sexual in nature.

[The Rod]

well that's good...

I write quite a few different styles, all depending on my mood at the time. I also write erotica, and won a trophy once for one on a site. If you were ever up for it maybe we could do a collaboration. I've done one erotica collaboration before, and it actually turned out quite good. Just an idea...

[Brenda Starrr]

well that's good...

I write quite a few different styles, all depending on my mood at the time.  I also write erotica, and won a trophy once for one on a site.  If you were ever up for it maybe we could do a collaboration.  I've done one erotica collaboration before, and it actually turned out quite good.  Just an idea...

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I really think it's a great idea. I had written a scenario that was really, really hot. However, when my computer crashed, it got lost.

[The Rod]

the same thing happened to my old ones sadly (everything that wasn't uploaded to the poetry site), or else I'd put one on here as an example. But yeah, whenever I'm not totally busy one day we'll have to do a melding of the erotic minds and see what we come up with.

[Brenda Starrr]

the same thing happened to my old ones sadly (everything that wasn't uploaded to the poetry site), or else I'd put one on here as an example.  But yeah, whenever I'm not totally busy one day we'll have to do a melding of the erotic minds and see what we come up with.

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I was heartbroken over it, Brian. I worked hard on it. If you read it, you saw what was happening. I was really proud of this piece.

[The Rod]

I feel your pain Brenda. And I would say that I hope that you can write one like that once again to make up for it, but you can never truly get those great ones back...