Something I wrote...

[DeadBurgerKing (10)]

I was in an odd mood when I worte this and it's diffrent from the rest of my work...So that's why I'm asking for opinions...it's called "Chaotic Thoughts"

I have grown tired of my existance as it is. I crave change. What is it I need? What is it I want? Maybe what I want and require I allready have? Maybe they are laying dormant inside myself. Retired, with all the other things I have tossed aside and labeled as "useless".

Dare I open that door to my mind unlocking the madness and anxious thoughts? That door I have barred shut with my false securities. If I do, will I still be the man I am now? Is the risk of losing myself to the chaos that ensues in my mind worth it? This is the moment I take in all I ever was and all I'll ever be into consideration. Do I need improvement, are all the things I need really in this vortex of my mind?

I grind my teeth and inhale deeply as I reach for the door and slowly creek it open....

[BillyDeath]

good story.

[DeadBurgerKing (10)]

Thanks

[Homicidalheathen]

Don't open the door...... :fear

[kellygrrrrrl]

I feel the same way DBK....

Very intense, and honest. I like that.