Past Unimportant

[flowofwoe]

I can never say

impressive things

because I want

to impress you

I can whisper gentle

words that cut

and make them bleed

for the want of me

but they

don't concern me

I don't understand

Why I'm frail

and lost in doubt

when I speak

to you

I know where I stand

with them

Two feet from desire

and closer to

seduction

Where am I with you?

Am I even a thought?

The ghost of a feeling?

I think I am fading

past unimportant.

© Phillip J Rhoades (flowofwoe)

[Jadis]

Wow ... I really like this flow.

:~) Keep them coming!

[Amerist]

People worth liking often make us nervous; especially when we don't know where we stand with them.

[flowofwoe]

Thanks for the feedback.

[Kit Kat P]

I really like this one.

[jadnifer]

Very very good!

[Homicidalheathen]

~sigh~

My heart just fluttered a little.

Then again maybe I swallowed a butterfly.......?

[Medea]

Man... I know how -this- feels.

[flowofwoe]

I really like this one.

Thank you. Is there a line you like the most, or just the overall tone?

Very very good!

Thanks so much!

~sigh~

My heart just fluttered a little.

Then again maybe I swallowed a butterfly.......?

Maybe it's both.

Man... I know how -this- feels.

I'm glad it speaks to you.