What? Godfallen Does Poetry Too?

[Guest GodfallenPromos]

The Last Words of Moctezuma II

Falling, falling, falling faster,

everything passing rests as disaster.

The murder, the rape,

the ecstasy of what they take.

Ripped out and torn,

the ground harbors the unborn.

Crippled and slaughtered,

faith in our gods martyred.

See the evil greed causes,

as now our culture is among the losses.

[BrassFusion]

The Last Words of Moctezuma II

Falling, falling, falling faster,

everything passing rests as disaster.

The murder, the rape,

the ecstasy of what they take.

Ripped out and torn,

the ground harbors the unborn.

Crippled and slaughtered,

faith in our gods martyred.

See the evil greed causes,

as now our culture is among the losses.

Short, sweet. I'm a big fan of poetry that mixes a rhyme scheme and free verse.

[Guest GodfallenPromos]

Short, sweet. I'm a big fan of poetry that mixes a rhyme scheme and free verse.

lol...it's funny...i didn't get into the rhyme scheme till I got locked up about 4 years ago in MCJ....then I took up writing verses on the walls, and soon, even the jail officers were walking in and reading it...and were floored at the complexity of some of the stuff.

I even did some "battle rapping" in the jail...and beat a couple "champs" cuz all they did was repeat lines about guns and violence....when my "violence lines" pointed more to people thinking other inferior.

[Guest GodfallenPromos]

Ode to My Former Best Friend Bob who now Lives Down on the West Side

I knew a crooked man,

who had a crooked smile.

His wife was crooked too,

because she was a walker on the miles.

They had a 16-year-old daughter,

who just got her 4-month old baby back.

That girl ain't got no teeth,

cuz she's addicted to the crack.

They live in an abandoned house,

in a crooked neighorhood.

He snorts coke, she chases the dragon,

that whole family ain't no good.

They got a crooked car,

that they bought in the ghetto.

The back lights are taped up

the front is grey, and the back of that bitch is yellow!

He works a dead end job,

in a crooked factory.

while he is at work, his best friend is fucking his wife,

so now they all have HIV.

The moral of this story,

is for all you wicked, crooked kids.

Straighten your lives up,

Or your story will be his.