TomCat Posted May 18, 2005 Posted May 18, 2005 Just a Raindrop I have nothing in common With what I desire. I'm just cold and wet Instead of searing with fire. I wanted to reach new heights But I just fall to greater depths. My father's big disappointment The reason my mother has wept. My hand is outstreched for you You laughed and would not take it. You didn't think it hurt me much But that's because i faked it. Like many others before me That you ran into the ground. I'm one of many raindrops In this sea of sorrow I drown. "Just a raindrop" by Jeff G. (aka, me)
Brenda Starrr Posted May 18, 2005 Posted May 18, 2005 You really have a way of writing some heartbreaking poetry, Jeff.
bellbottoms Posted May 18, 2005 Posted May 18, 2005 i agree with brenda. i love this line **I'm one of many raindrops** well put!!
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