Sweet Angel

[bean]

Beautiful angel,

down on her knees,

singing her lovely song,

with her mouth wide open.

She learned her craft well,

all those times after school,

alone with the teacher -

he taught her lesson well.

Quickly you must go;

run now before eyes glimpse -

like a dirty l'il secret

that daddy said to keep.

Sweet, sweet, perfect angel,

fly away from this pain;

take this blade and become

free from this torture.

[Mikielikesit]

Hmmmmm...A guided imaginary into family secrets that blossom into craving attention from her teacher that never really cared.....to her time when the pain became to great ........the end is near

[Sybil]

lets see..

..a pure-hearted girl that is used by everyone, everywhere she goes..

hasnt done anything to defend herself ..

..yet.

[Brenda Starrr]

Beautiful....

[Sybil]

i like this one alot BeanWater..

[bean]

Thanks..it's actually a very dark poem, about someone I knew, so I'm not going to go into its exact meaning.

[Guest Game of Chance]

yeah its a little depressing...sorry for your friend =(

[the eternal]

Thanks..it's actually a very dark poem, about someone I knew, so I'm not going to go into its exact meaning.

glad it wasnt you

another one at the top of my list

great imagery

tough ending to read

[the eternal]

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