The Love of Seduction

[brise]

Been removed............

[Amerist]

Hm, oh dear.

The beginning is very cute--but I'm afraid this story is way more mature than I can aptly handle.

I've read a few of the segments already. The interplay and the descriptive narrative, while a little bit muddy in places, seems to attract the sensual, which I think is the idea. It's certainly an adorable little erotic romp cascading from nightclub to secluded hideout.

I cannot go too much farther than that and not faint so I'm sorry I couldn't give thee a much more comprehensive review than my little: "Hey I read it..."

The multipost format isn't really necessary, I think it would have worked okay if it was just a chain of replies (less likely to get split up that way also.)

[Mikielikesit]

Oh I love seduction and your story is quite reviting...very erotic and exciting.

Your story has all the qualities of a fantastic love story and a fantasy.

[brise]

Thank you ever so much you will enjoy the other parts as well

Oh I love seduction and your story is quite reviting...very erotic and exciting.

Your story has all the qualities of a fantastic love story and a fantasy.

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