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nodrew

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nodrew Newbie

nodrew

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I'm caught in a whirlwind

dizzy from too much of this world

falling down

spots fill my vision

perhaps the blood has rushed to my head

is it just me

or was I supposed to be somewhere else today?

Brenda Starrr Newbie

Brenda Starrr

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I like it, Drew.

Guest Game of Chance

Guest Game of Chance

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I liked it too.

But it did remind me of Dante from Clerks.

"I'm not even supposed to be here today."

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