Needy

[Brenda Starrr]

I ache when you're not here

I cry when you're hurting

I dream of you while sleeping

Isn't that what I should do?

I wish when you need something

I hope when all is lost

I yearn to feel you hold me

Is my love not true?

I want when there is nothing

I need you for everything

I desire to have you near me

It it that I ask too much?

I thirst when you are away

I hunger for your heart

I think I need you badly

What else can I do?

[the eternal]

you sap!

seriously, that's a very sweet poem

I think why Im the first responder is its not angsty enough for us messed up souls

write another one when your life is as screwed up as so many of us

actually, scratch that, keep doimg what your doing then we can be envious and more depressed over our envy and then we can reach toward goth nirvana

[Moonlight_Phantasy]

Awww.......

[torn asunder]

some days, i wish i could still relate to this - gets the point across very well, nice work!

[Brenda Starrr]

Thank you.

[Nienna]

Oh geez! Your poems are always like you are picking my brain!

[Brenda Starrr]

Perhaps we're quite a bit alike! You're just WAY prettier!

[Nienna]

Perhaps we're quite a bit alike! You're just WAY prettier!

<{POST_SNAPBACK}>

Oh whatever! *SNAP!*

[Brenda Starrr]

Pfft! Whatever yourself!!

[Nienna]

Pfft! Whatever yourself!!

<{POST_SNAPBACK}>

Nah.. I'm almost a sea donkey!

[saechalyn]

Will you two knock it off you are both gorgeous!!! (though I LOLed at "sea donkey")

Nice poem Brenda

[Brenda Starrr]

Uh, no. Just no.

Amazing how my poetry inspires this sort of thing....

Now quit arguing with me! I saw you, and you're beautiful. Jeez!

[Nienna]

Uh, no. Just no.

Amazing how my poetry inspires this sort of thing....

Now quit arguing with me! I saw you, and you're beautiful. Jeez!

<{POST_SNAPBACK}>

Well you are too and you INSIST on arguing with people about it!!

[the eternal]

I love it when two beautiful people fight over who's not pretty.

BTW, are sea donkeys that pretty? I've never looked them up. :blink